The eternal darkness engulfs me
Winds play the songs from my soul
Singing to me my own lyrics
That I've been yet afraid to compose.
The wind rides through me,
Carries away my emotions with ease,
Dances along my skin and teases my hair...
So calming...
But it's a false sense of security.
Secretly my heart longs to be one with the wind,
So carefree and accepted...
To no longer be plagued with petty feelings of insignificance.
Deep breath chills my insides,
Clears my thinking.
The wind once again embraces me
And for a brief moment,
Everything seems right once more.
On this page, you can:
Start your own free art collection. Sign up here!DownloadSee more of this artist:XcrimsonangelX's ProfileXcrimsonangelX's Gallery
©2008-2009 ~XcrimsonangelX
Author's Comments
I'm in an interesting place in my life. Took a walk last night in the 30mph ish winds we're having and as I walked I wrote this in my head. When I got back I put it onto paper. I was kinda nervous about posting it... but a friend read it already and he approves so here it is. Enjoy.
I'm looking for heavy critique here. Anything and everything is appriciated. Thanks. (Btw, the title isn't set in stone. I just suck at naming my poems. If you have a better idea for one, please let me know!) |
|
Report a Policy Violation
Site Map
Community News171 5 Tips to Maintaining and Gaining Watchers*ProjectComment
 reports, 15h 34m agoFor those who have many watchers, and for those who don’t have many, it is hard to know how one retains that interest as well as receive more. This article explores the basics of watchers and how we react to certain situations. Although it does not affect some deviants, and the tips are generally related to common sense, we hope the article is a worthwhile read and that the majority learn something from reading this. 127 FACES! 280 Pieces showing Expression and Technique*rebeka-anne
 reports, 18h 48m agoA Great (and huge) collection of faces showing facial expression and technique in all mediums. 76 Daily Literature Deviations - November 14, 2009=DailyLitDeviations
 reports, 1d 23h agoDaily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it. Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you  the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community.63 Project Comment: 0-5 Comments // Issue 38*ProjectComment
reports, 1d 15h agoProject Comment is a project that features the generally obscured and underappreciated artists and their art in regular news articles. Our objective is to recognise deviants who deserve more recognition and to feature deviations with less than 10 original comments. The 0-5 Comments Issues feature a deviant as well as 3 deviations with less than 5 original comments from a wide selection of art. Please give your time to  this article and to write constructive comments so that you make a true difference to the artists featured here.62 Daily Literature Deviations- November 15, 2009=DailyLitDeviations
reports, 1d 54m agoDaily Literature Deviations is a group that is dedicated to bringing literature to the forefront of the deviantArt community. We attempt to accomplish this by daily featuring Literature artists from around the community that deserve the recognition, but are not getting it. Each day we will feature 5 deviations from the Literature categories in a News Article. In order to support the artists that we feature, we ask that you the news article as well as check out the individual pieces. We understand that each day you may not be able to check out each and every one of the pieces, everyone has their own things going on. We just ask that you make an attempt to help support the growing Literature community. |
PollHaters... |
deviantART Loves You
Deviously serving the art and skin community for 3,388 days.
Only 264 days until our tenth birthday!
|
Deviousness
The Deviousness Award is an accolade which is traditionally handed out on the 1st of every month to one trully outstanding deviant. `Cyantre is one of the most helpful deviants within our community. With a positive attitude and a resourceful mind, you can always find him providing support and encouragement to those in need. Always looking for ways in which he can get more involved in our community, John's positive presence is to be aspired to. A well respected poet, John is a must-have on your deviantWATCH to make sure that you don't miss out on your dose of community inspiration. It's with great pleasure that the Deviousness Award for November 2009 goes to... Read More
|
Follow us on Twitter
Become a fan on Facebook
©2009 deviantART. All rights reserved
Comments
I love the part, "To no longer be plagued with petty feelings of insignificance."
And I think A Brief Moment would make a good title.
--
[link] < My City!
Where is salvation? Science? Saviours? Tragedy?
I really like that... A Brief Moment.
--
Wings won't take me, Heights don't phase me, So take a step, But don't look down
--
[link] < My City!
Where is salvation? Science? Saviours? Tragedy?
Previous PageNext Page