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Theme 11 - Memory - Them by ~XcrimsonangelX:iconXcrimsonangelX:



Dreamless sleep disturbed...
A distant,
Enraged male voice screaming,
Cursing...
A pleading,
Shocked female voice...
Muffled.
An unwanted stranger
Falls victim to a
Harsh verbal lashing...
A security blanket.
The clock keeps ticking.
A new voice on the scene...
Male,
Authorative.
A door forced open,
A shiney badge.
Words exchanged,
All forgein.
Time slows with
A pat on the head...
The blanket pulled away,
Two scared looking eyes...
A scream.
Time freezes,
Innocence met with evil...
An explanation that
Doesn't make sense...
You can't!
Don't take her,
Take him!

Tears begin to fall.
©2006-2009 ~XcrimsonangelX
:iconxcrimsonangelx:

Author's Comments

Again, wrote at 2:00 am.

The theme is not obvious in the poem... at all. You have to know the background story to understand...

It's a personal memory that I have... one of the worst at that. Please don't ask about it... I'd rather not talk about it...

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:iconpoetarryl:
nice work =)

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If you do not change the direction in which you are going, you will end up where you are headed. ~Confucius
:iconxcrimsonangelx:
Thank you. =)

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Wings won't take me, Heights don't phase me, So take a step, But don't look down
:iconsairalin6:
I LIKE YOUR STYLE ALOT***
:iconxcrimsonangelx:
Thanks, glad someone likes it. lol =)

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Wings won't take me, Heights don't phase me, So take a step, But don't look down
:iconxcrimsonangelx:
Thank you! =)

:hug:

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Wings won't take me, Heights don't phase me, So take a step, But don't look down

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